As writers, we get stuck. Plain. Simple. In the mud. Stuck. Words cease to flow from our brains to our fingertips. Whether we prefer a keyboard, pencil, or pen, the mojo dams up like the Colorado River behind Hoover Dam. There is no clicking of keys, scratching of head, or ink smears on your hand. Oh, and by the way, there are only another one thousand words to write to reach your daily goal.
Let’s set out to solve
this predicament you’re in
fast, easy, and fun.
That’s right. By limiting yourself to seventeen syllables (like the haiku you just read,) you can kick start your creative gears and return to churning out page after page of writerly goodness. While you go back and count the syllables in the poem above, (I know you are,) think about this: Anyone, I mean ANYONE, can write seventeen syllables, right? (Ha, there’s seventeen in that sentence! I’ll wait. I know you’re counting those as well.)
Amidst the moans, groans, and gnashing of teeth about “not getting haiku,” take a moment to hear me out.
First, let’s acknowledge that there are as many rules to writing haiku as years the poetry form itself has been around. Second, let’s forget all of those rules except two: 1) Three lines, 2) seventeen syllables. Period. Keep the basic structure and move forward by picking a topic. You can choose something from your work or other topic randomly unassociated.
If you’re writing crime fiction and you need a way for the bank robber to get away with the loot that isn’t already over written, give haiku a try. Something like this, maybe:
Eyes behind the mask
Looks left, right, sees sewer grate
Plugs nose and jumps down.
Which leads to:
Sludge fills up his shoes
Rats scamper all directions
Flashlight left behind.
Now your villain is stuck in the dark, poopy sludge in his shoes, rats all around and he wants to keep the money clean, which ties up one of his hands. How does he get out?
Or maybe you’re stuck on a scene that is void of emotion, but is screaming for some to carry your main character through. Work a haiku that digs deep into your heart:
Love fades with sunset
Sand castles crumble with tides
Washing away hope.
Or you want to relate to a cold-blooded killer but aren’t sure how:
Sniper in the tree
Kills enemy one by one
Repeats tomorrow.
Write something like that and then take stock of your reaction to the words, quickly jotting down those feelings without thinking any more about them. How do they fit your character’s frame of mind? Can he/she relate to what you’ve written? Or maybe the character scoffs at your words, which gives you insight into their psyche that you hadn’t seen before.
The restriction of three lines limited to seventeen syllables forces you to be selective in your word choice while still conveying a powerful message or image. And who among us has ever used too few words in their manuscript?
The next time you find yourself stuck, or are in need of a fun exercise to get into a writing mood, think about (and then write) a haiku. This ancient poetry form can help flex your writing muscles and tighten up your word count.
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Dean K Miller is the creator of the “Haiku For You Project,” a unique, in person, by request poetry event that you can book for your next business conference, class reunion, family function, wedding, or any other gathering. His first book of haiku, Sometimes the Walls Cry: A Book of Haiku and Sketch is now available on Amazon and Createspace. Visit www.thehaikuforyouproject.com and www.deankmiller.com for more information.
Dean is giving away one copy of Sometimes the Walls Cry to one randomly drawn winner from those who leave a comment below before midnight Saturday, June 4th. To order your own copy at a 20% discount, visit the Createspace book store at: https://www.createspace.com/6167375 and use the code, 2FJMW9B6 at checkout. The code is valid until June 30th. Also, if you’d like to receive a free pdf copy in exchange for an honest review, contact Dean at: deankmillerATliveDotcom.
Patricia says
The winner of a copy of Dean’s book goes to Sheila. Congratulations, Sheila. Dean will be in touch soon by email.
Dean Miller says
Who wins the free book?
Sheila is the lucky one!
Congratulations!
Laura Mahal says
‘Tis true, I agree.
Writing haiku is lovely.
A creative spark.
Dean Miller says
Laura has it right
In seventeen syllables
Word beauty is formed
Dean k miller says
Patricia:
Thanks for hosting me
And my haiku poetry
With all your readers!
Patricia says
Does this mean I have to answer with a haiku? I’ll give it some thought and come back later. But just for the record, I love having you as a guest, Dean!
Sheila says
What a fantastic idea! Thank you for sharing!
Dean k miller says
Sheila:
You are sure welcome
Thanks for stopping by today
To read my guest post!
L. Diane Wolfe says
Most people tend to get over-wordy. That does limit it and forces one to choose only the best words.
Dean k miller says
Diane
Yup, wordy wordy
Need to trim the word count back
Choose only the best!
Laura Mcfadden says
I really like this idea. I’m going to try it out with my critique group next time we meet to get the creative juices flowing. Nicely done!
Dean k miller says
Laura:
Give the group a chance
To come up with a haiku
Yours will be the best!
April Moore says
What a great idea! I wrote my first haikus last year for a poetry/photography workshop and I really enjoyed it. I never thought about using them to inspire my fiction. Congrats on the book, Dean!
Dean k miller says
April
Such a smart young lass
To use haiku for fiction
And make your book great!
Margot Kinberg says
There’s definitely something about the discipline of the haiku structure that can get the brain thinking of creative ways to express something. This is a really interesting perspective, for which thanks.
Dean Miller says
Margot: You’ve hit one of the key points that helps me. . . the structure and limitations works my brain in good ways.
Dean k miller says
Margot:
It takes discipline
To hit the syllable mark
And groove your writing!
Alex J. Cavanaugh says
I’m lousy at poetry, but even I might be able to handle seventeen syllables. Although believe it or not, I am one of those writers who uses too few words.
Congratulations on the new release, Dean!
Dean Miller says
Hi Alex! Too few words, okay than create a haiku with only 5 or 6 words as your challenge. Brevity is where it’s at!
Dean k miller says
You think you’re lousy
But I think you’ll be surprised
At your haiku skills!